Sunday, March 9, 2014

9/31


When I am angry,
I feel it in my back. (my back)
a sort of ache,
in the middle of my back. (my back)
It does not go away,
gets worse if I play
a sort of ache,
in the middle of my back. (my back)

If I am an actor,
I will be a pain. (in the donkey)
It is certain, I'll whine,
and be a pain. (in the donkey)
I'll nag and wail and swear,
and complain about my hair.
It is certain,
I'll whine and be a pain. (in the donkey)

If I turn this into a song it won't be filtered, (won't be filtered)
If I turn this into a song it won't be filtered, (won't be filtered)
I'm as grumpy as a raging moose,
i'm afraid this rock might become loosed,
oh, if I turn this into a song it won't be filtered.
Yee haw!

7 comments:

  1. Ok, that's awesome. I can just imagine you writing this. The yeehaw at the end adds a pretty awesome effect (just kidding)

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  2. It has rhythm, and it has feeling. Maybe next time you can sing it and share it with one of the apps available, like SoundCloud?

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  3. I disagree with sarah the yee haw is great but i can see you singing that

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  4. I love this song! In my mind it is playing to the music form Hot and Bothered for Narnia.

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  5. Haha, that was a really funny way to let out you anger. Nice job! :)

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  6. I want to hear it with you playing guitar (uncensored of course). Great rhythm, rhyme and flow. The second verse especially speaks to me, and not just the part about the donkey.

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  7. Sometimes I just give up on trying not to complain. This is funny, I like it.

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